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the ideas are pretty good. my only problems are that the distortion sounds...weird. like it doesn't actually stand out very much, especialy from the bass which i think is a bit too loud compared to the guitars. try making the guitars louder with more bass. my other problem was the fact that there were no drums, but hey you dont have a program for em, so no points off for that. If you'd like some suggestions about finding a good drum program, pm me.
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